Your writing is at times really excellent Vicky. You could get a distinction here I believe BUT your REALLY need to proofread your work. Too many errors - this would pull your work down to M if you did not correct them on the real screenplay. Examples of mistakes: your/you're; meant/ment; stares/staires; scurries/scurry's/ sweety/sweaty. Also use of apostrophes in general. GREAT work in places though.
Your writing is at times really excellent Vicky. You could get a distinction here I believe BUT your REALLY need to proofread your work. Too many errors - this would pull your work down to M if you did not correct them on the real screenplay. Examples of mistakes: your/you're; meant/ment; stares/staires; scurries/scurry's/ sweety/sweaty. Also use of apostrophes in general. GREAT work in places though.
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